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Mark Olmsted's avatar

I just love the way you write. "The invitation hangs in the air like smoke." Always evocative, avoiding cliches. And of course the eroticism is perfectly done. Looking forward to the next part, or rather finding the time to read it.

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Guya by Zayq 🌈🍆's avatar

Buddy, I appreciate that comment very very much, thankyou. I want to take every reader to a happy/horny place, but I want to evoke these fantastic environments and places of the imagination too. Sending love. Z x

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MikeB's avatar

Looks like Cho and Kreszo are headed for an adventure; and possibly romance.(I hope)

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Guya by Zayq 🌈🍆's avatar

This story has a long long way to run...there will be ups and there will be downs x

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