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Mark Olmsted's avatar

I just love the way you write. "The invitation hangs in the air like smoke." Always evocative, avoiding cliches. And of course the eroticism is perfectly done. Looking forward to the next part, or rather finding the time to read it.

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MikeB's avatar

Looks like Cho and Kreszo are headed for an adventure; and possibly romance.(I hope)

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